
The Cherayroos: Underground Rules
The Cherayroos: Underground Rules
S. P. Doran
self-published. 2025
80pp., pbk., RRP $A28.59
9781764407007
Far away, hidden by an invisible force, lay a long-forgotten, secret, ancient forest called the Whisperdeep… Deep beneath the forest, the streets of CherayrooVille glowed soft green and amber from the roots of the Tree of Solace. Its big roost twisted through the underground village like magic veins, bathing everything in a warm, shimmering light… Beneath the giant Whisperroot tree, twisting tunnels led to this secret village nestled in the great tavern…
And in this underground world, in homes made of twigs, tree vines and leaves, lived small ancient creatures with saucer-like eyes twig-like arms and legs, and brown and green fluffy hair as they blended into their surroundings. Small, but not shy, they were smart and creative, using the treasures of the forest to make toys and treats. They even had their own language, as they spoke to each other in trumpets, puffs, whistles and chirps.

Cherayroo life was governed by the Rootscript of Rules and the most important was that only the Chief and his brave friends could leave the village – which was fine because the villagers preferred to stay home. Except for one. Chie did not want to stay home and he did not want to be the baker that seemed to be his destiny. Chie is “part-explorer, part inventor and full -time rule-bender” who dreams of exploring the Above and becoming a warrior. And then he discovers a map and he decides that this is his chance…

In this richly illustrated fantasy for young, emerging readers, the author has created a whole new world of landscapes and characters to appeal to those who like Chie, want to push the boundaries and go a bit further than they should. They join Chie on his adventures as he explores meeting some strange creatures on his travels – not all of whom are as friendly as he would like – and while he is brave and resilient, he learns some important lessons – as does the reader who sees themselves in Chie, wanting to explore and discover and oblivious to the possible consequences.
Formatted and illustrated as a picture book, it is written in short chapters bridging the divide between picture book and novel, as well as including information about the Cherayvoos language, some of the Rootscript Rules, a quiz and some questions for readers to ponder. There is also a website and a YT channel to add extra dimension and one suspects, there will be more adventures in the future.
There is much in this for both the younger and older reader, as they consider all the factors and challenges that would need to be addressed to build a whole, new world like this so that readers are immersed in the surroundings, and the characters’ personalities and stories as reality slips away. There is so much more to an engaging story than words and pictures. A worthwhile investment particularly if there is a story-writers group in the school or a budding novelist in the family. Perhaps start by sharing the description of a Cherayroo without sharing the illustration, and have the students interpret the words into a picture – and then discuss why each interpretation is different. And for those not yet ready to create their own whole new world, perhaps they could imagine where Chie’s next adventure might take him…















